{"id":3204,"date":"2026-09-16T13:19:59","date_gmt":"2026-09-16T13:19:59","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/thechapterstory.online\/?p=3204"},"modified":"2026-09-16T13:19:59","modified_gmt":"2026-09-16T13:19:59","slug":"part-8-i-refused-to-walk-into-the-motel-trap-alone-but-marlenes-confession-revealed-why-eleanor-needed-me-dead-before-friday","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/thechapterstory.online\/?p=3204","title":{"rendered":"PART 8 \u2013 I Refused to Walk Into the Motel Trap Alone, but Marlene\u2019s Confession Revealed Why Eleanor Needed Me Dead Before Friday"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Detective Alvarez took my replacement phone from my hand before I could respond.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo contact.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I stared at the photograph of Marlene on the screen.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe\u2019s alive.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cPossibly.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe\u2019s holding today\u2019s newspaper.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat proves the photograph was taken recently. It does not prove her current condition.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe looks terrified.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSo we do nothing?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo. We do this correctly.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>His tone was not dismissive.<\/p>\n<p>That made it harder to argue.<\/p>\n<p>Alvarez enlarged the address.<\/p>\n<p>A roadside motel twenty-five minutes north.<\/p>\n<p>Detective Chen was already typing.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWe can pull camera coverage around the property.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Sandra touched my wrist.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou are not going.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI know.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The answer surprised me.<\/p>\n<p>A day earlier I might have believed courage meant walking into the room myself.<\/p>\n<p>After the balcony, I understood courage differently.<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes it meant refusing the conditions someone else had chosen for you.<\/p>\n<p>Alvarez drafted a reply through the phone.<\/p>\n<p>Need proof Marlene can speak freely.<\/p>\n<p>The response came almost immediately.<\/p>\n<p>She can.<\/p>\n<p>Then a voice message.<\/p>\n<p>Alvarez played it once.<\/p>\n<p>Marlene\u2019s voice.<\/p>\n<p>Thin.<\/p>\n<p>Shaking.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSkylar, please listen to them. Don\u2019t come here. Whatever they tell you, don\u2019t\u2014\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The recording cut off.<\/p>\n<p>I gripped the edge of the table.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat\u2019s her.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Alvarez nodded.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSounds like it.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Another message appeared.<\/p>\n<p>Last chance.<\/p>\n<p>Sandra said, \u201cThey want to force urgency.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Alvarez did not reply.<\/p>\n<p>Instead he made three calls.<\/p>\n<p>Within minutes, officers were moving.<\/p>\n<p>Not toward the room directly.<\/p>\n<p>Toward cameras.<\/p>\n<p>License plate readers.<\/p>\n<p>Traffic routes.<\/p>\n<p>The motel reservation.<\/p>\n<p>The person paying for it.<\/p>\n<p>I sat at the conference table hating every second of waiting.<\/p>\n<p>Then Chen looked up.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cRoom is registered to a shell company.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Sandra almost smiled without humor.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cOf course.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cPayment card traces to a corporate account.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhose?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Chen looked at Alvarez.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEleanor Greer.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>There it was again.<\/p>\n<p>Not proof she was physically present.<\/p>\n<p>But connection.<\/p>\n<p>Alvarez stood.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWe have enough for exigent concern combined with the kidnapping indicators.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>He pointed to another officer.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cCoordinate local response.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I started to rise.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cStay here.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI wasn\u2019t going anywhere.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>He studied me.<\/p>\n<p>Then nodded.<\/p>\n<p>The next thirty-five minutes lasted longer than the entire morning had.<\/p>\n<p>Sandra made calls to my bank.<\/p>\n<p>I pretended to review loan documents.<\/p>\n<p>Neither of us absorbed anything.<\/p>\n<p>At one point, I realized my left hand was gripping my right wrist hard enough to leave marks.<\/p>\n<p>I released it.<\/p>\n<p>Finally Alvarez\u2019s phone rang.<\/p>\n<p>He answered.<\/p>\n<p>Listened.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAlive?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>My eyes closed.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cCondition?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Another pause.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWho else?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>His expression sharpened.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cUnderstood.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>He ended the call.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cMarlene is alive.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Air left my lungs.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWas anyone with her?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNot when officers entered.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThen who took the picture?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWe don\u2019t know yet.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWas she locked in?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>My relief vanished.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cKidnapped?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cIt appears she was being held against her will.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Sandra asked, \u201cInjuries?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDehydrated. Bruising. No immediate life-threatening trauma reported.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cCan she talk?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe already is.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I stood.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI want to see her.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDetective\u2014\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNot yet.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I hated the answer.<\/p>\n<p>But I understood it.<\/p>\n<p>Marlene was transported to a hospital.<\/p>\n<p>Officers secured the room.<\/p>\n<p>Camera footage showed a man wearing a cap leaving through a side stairwell less than fifteen minutes before police arrived.<\/p>\n<p>He drove a gray sedan with plates obscured by a temporary paper tag.<\/p>\n<p>The vehicle was gone.<\/p>\n<p>By afternoon, Alvarez permitted Sandra and me to come to the hospital only after Marlene requested to see me.<\/p>\n<p>She looked twenty years older than I remembered.<\/p>\n<p>Her hair, normally styled with precise silver waves, hung loose around her face.<\/p>\n<p>Dark bruising marked one cheek.<\/p>\n<p>There were raw red abrasions around one wrist.<\/p>\n<p>When I entered, she began crying.<\/p>\n<p>I stopped several feet from the bed.<\/p>\n<p>The sound did nothing to soften my anger.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cMarlene.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI\u2019m sorry.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Her voice cracked.<\/p>\n<p>I remained standing.<\/p>\n<p>Sandra took a chair near the door.<\/p>\n<p>Detective Alvarez stood beside the window.<\/p>\n<p>The arrangement reminded me that this was not a private reconciliation.<\/p>\n<p>It was evidence.<\/p>\n<p>Marlene wiped her face.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI never thought it would become this.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat did you think would happen?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>She looked down.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI thought they wanted restitution.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cFor what?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYour father.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cTell me.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>She closed her eyes.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEleanor believed Charles stole Meridian from her.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDid he?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The answer came quickly.<\/p>\n<p>I stared at her.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou told Derek\u2019s family otherwise?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI didn\u2019t tell them he stole it.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat did you tell them?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat the settlement had been unfair.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I laughed once.<\/p>\n<p>It sounded ugly.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou gave them my records.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cMy Social Security number?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Her silence answered.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cMy financial history?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cOld signatures?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>She began crying again.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I wanted to leave.<\/p>\n<p>Sandra shifted slightly but did not stop me when I stepped closer to the bed.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhy?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBecause I was angry.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAt me?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAt Charles.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cMy father had been dead for years.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI know.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThen you punished me.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene looked at me.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou don\u2019t understand.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThen explain it.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>She swallowed.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAfter Meridian collapsed, Eleanor lost everything. Her husband blamed her. Their marriage broke apart. Her father had invested too. He died convinced Charles ruined them.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd what did my father lose?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene looked away.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHe survived.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat isn\u2019t an answer.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHe survived financially.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSo that made him guilty?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>She whispered the word.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI helped Charles during the lawsuit.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI know.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI saw the books.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHe moved the reserve money because Eleanor had begun making withdrawals without board approval.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>That matched the old petition.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHow much?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAlmost six hundred thousand.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhy?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe said she was trying to protect her share before creditors took everything.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSo Dad stopped her.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThen why did she think he stole from her?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBecause when he moved the remaining reserve into the creditor trust, she lost access to it.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I stared.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat money was not hers.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThen what exactly was she owed?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene\u2019s voice became even smaller.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNothing close to what she believed.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The room went quiet.<\/p>\n<p>I thought of Eleanor\u2019s message.<\/p>\n<p>What your family owes.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHow much did Dad pay in the settlement?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cTwo hundred thousand.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cTo Eleanor?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd she still believed he owed her?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe believed she deserved half the company\u2019s value before the collapse.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBut the company had debts.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe blamed him for refusing to hide money from creditors.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I took a slow breath.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd you?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene\u2019s face changed.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cMy husband had invested in Meridian too.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>There it was.<\/p>\n<p>Personal.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHow much did he lose?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEverything we had saved.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSo you blamed Dad.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cFor years.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEven though you knew what the books showed?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI knew what the books showed.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThen why?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBecause grief and anger are easier when they have a person attached to them.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The honesty did not excuse her.<\/p>\n<p>But it was the first thing she had said that sounded entirely true.<\/p>\n<p>I pulled a chair closer and sat.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHow did you become involved with Eleanor again?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe contacted me six years ago.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhy?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe said she wanted closure.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou believed her.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAt first.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene looked toward Alvarez.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWe met several times. She asked questions about Charles. Then about you.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhen?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBefore you met Derek.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>My throat tightened.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDid you tell her where I would be at that charity gala?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I closed my eyes briefly.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd Derek?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe said her son wanted to meet you.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhy?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe said maybe the families could stop hating each other.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I stared at her.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou believed that?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI wanted to.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDid Derek know who I was?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBefore he introduced himself?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The answer hurt despite everything I already knew.<\/p>\n<p>Our first meeting.<\/p>\n<p>Our first date.<\/p>\n<p>Our marriage.<\/p>\n<p>All built over information withheld from me.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWas he supposed to marry me?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene hesitated.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI don\u2019t know.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWas that the plan?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEleanor never said marriage.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat did she say?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat Derek should get close.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHow close?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe never defined it.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I laughed bitterly.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHe figured it out.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene looked down.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cFor the first year, I thought he actually cared about you.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cMaybe he did.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The words left me before I could stop them.<\/p>\n<p>Marlene looked at me.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHe did.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I stiffened.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHow would you know?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBecause Eleanor complained.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>My mind returned to the deleted messages.<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes I think you actually love her.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat changed?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cMoney.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBe specific.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene took a breath.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEleanor expected Derek to persuade you to give her access to part of your father\u2019s estate.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhy would I?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBecause she planned to show you the old Meridian records and tell you Charles had stolen from her.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEven though you knew that was false.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBut Derek never told me any of this.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhy?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHe thought you would investigate.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>That almost made me smile.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHe was right.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEleanor wanted you emotionally committed before you learned anything.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSo he married me.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI think that became his choice.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I sat very still.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat happened after the wedding?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThey started taking money slowly.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cFamily emergencies.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSuzanne.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cCars. Trips. Bills.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene nodded.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEleanor called it repayment.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I felt disgust rise in my throat.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd Derek?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAt first he argued with her.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHow do you know?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cHe told me.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou and Derek were talking?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSometimes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAbout me?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDid he tell you he loved me?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene\u2019s eyes filled.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I looked away.<\/p>\n<p>That answer was somehow worse than hearing the entire marriage had been fake.<\/p>\n<p>A completely false husband would have been easier to understand.<\/p>\n<p>A man capable of loving me and still helping his family exploit me was harder.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhen did you realize they might hurt me?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cLast year.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat happened?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEleanor asked whether your father had ever created a trust that would pay Derek if you died.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>My skin prickled.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat did you say?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat I didn\u2019t know.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDid you?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat else?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe began asking about insurance records.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd you helped?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene\u2019s face crumpled.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI gave her copies of old identification documents.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>My anger returned full force.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhy?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe said Derek needed them for estate planning.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou believed that after everything else?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI wanted to believe they were trying to secure themselves financially, not hurt you.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cFinancial fraud was acceptable?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBut you did it.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Sandra spoke for the first time.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhen was the life insurance application completed?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAbout seven months ago.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDid you witness Skylar\u2019s signature?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBut your name appears as witness.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI know.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDid you authorize that?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Alvarez made a note.<\/p>\n<p>Marlene continued.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhen I saw a copy, I confronted Eleanor.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat did she say?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat I had already helped enough to be implicated.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Blackmail.<\/p>\n<p>I understood immediately.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSo you tried to leave.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cShe stopped paying you.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat about the property transfer naming you?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene closed her eyes.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI was supposed to hold title temporarily.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhy?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cTo keep the apartment away from Derek if there was an investigation.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I stared at her.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cSo you agreed.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAt first.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cEven after the insurance policy?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI told them I wouldn\u2019t.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhen?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cFour months ago.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat happened?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDerek told me to stay out of it.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The recovered messages matched.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThen why disappear?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene looked toward Alvarez.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI found out what Friday meant.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>He leaned forward.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat does Friday mean?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene\u2019s hands began shaking.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cClosing.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I frowned.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cFor the mortgage?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Sandra sat straighter.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThe forged second mortgage is scheduled to fund Friday?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat is tomorrow.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene looked directly at me.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThey need Skylar alive until the loan closes.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>The room became silent.<\/p>\n<p>I felt the meaning before she finished speaking.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd after?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Marlene started crying.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI heard Eleanor and Suzanne talking.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhen?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cMonday.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat did they say?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThat once the money cleared, it didn\u2019t matter anymore.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>My heartbeat slowed in the strange way it did when fear became too large.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhat didn\u2019t matter?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhether you signed anything else.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>I looked at Alvarez.<\/p>\n<p>He said nothing.<\/p>\n<p>Marlene forced herself to continue.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI confronted Eleanor. I told her I would go to the police.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAnd she had you taken?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI left her house. Someone followed me.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWho?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI don\u2019t know.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cYou never saw him?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cOnly briefly.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWas it Derek?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>That mattered.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cDescribe him.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cTall. Maybe forties. Baseball cap. 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